Day 45: Desire



I looked At the half full bottle

And I wanted

The thirst quenching liquid On the bottom.


I tried to tip it up

But it was stopped

By a rubber seal.


Thinking I had

Made a mistake I tried again

To no avail.


In frustration

I was about to throw it away,

When it hit me;

I took a straw

Punctured the top

And drained the bottle.



To reach your desires

You must try

A different approach.



With this poem, I thought it would be better as a clearly defined story line.  I hope you enjoyed it, and I appreciate all your likes, that have been coming in.

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2 Responses to “Day 45: Desire”

  1. reverieremy Says:

    Just read this at the start of my day, I’ll try to keep that in mind–the whole, trying things from a different approach, thinking outside the box!

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